- Papyri: Love-poems & fragments
from Sappho & elsewhere (2007) - Ovid in Otherworld (2006)
- The Puppet Oresteia (2008)
- Chorus 1 - Cursed with prophecy
- Chorus 2 - I ran through the wood
- Chorus 3 - Little girl lost
- Chorus 4 - Joy lives with those
- Chorus 5 - Cursed with second sight
- Chorus 6 - See how Apollo
- Chorus 7 - The labour pains
- Chorus 8 - There she goes
- Chorus 9 - Drops of holy water
- Chorus 10 - Noise is like flame
- The Britney Suite (2003)
- COVER
- TITLE-PAGE
- COPYRIGHT
- DEDICATION
- CONTENTS
- QUOTATION (Britney Spears)
- [Paul Celan:] SCHNEEPART / SNOWPART
- QUOTATION (Paul Celan)
- QUOTATION (Cut Above)
- [Wendy Nu:] keith partridge y yo
- QUOTATION (Paul Celan)
- [Paul Celan:] ERZFLITTER / ORESPARK
- QUOTATION (Paul Celan)
- Who is Wendy Nu?
- QUOTATION (ISBN)
- Nouvelle vague
- QUOTATION (Britney Spears)
- [Paul Celan:] KALK-KROKUS / CHALK-CROCUS
- QUOTATION (Paul Celan)
- Letter to the author
- [Wendy Nu:] mr darling writes to penthouse forum
- QUOTATION (Paul Celan)
- [Paul Celan:] DAS GEDUNKELTE / DARK
- QUOTATION (Paul Celan)
- QUOTATION (John Felstiner)
- QUOTATION (Nine Days)
- It’s always too late ...
- QUOTATION (Britney Spears)
- [Paul Celan:] BEIDHÄNDIGE / BOTH-HANDED
- QUOTATION (Paul Celan)
- 31 Days (2009)
- François Villon, “Ballade à s’amie”
- Heinrich von Kleist, from Die Marquise von O
- Jorge Luis Borges, “El puñal”
- Victor Hugo, from Les Misérables
- Karl Kraus, from Aphorismen
- Garcilaso de la Vega, “Soneto XXXVII”
- Guillaume Apollinaire, from L'Hérésiarque & Cie
- Johann Wolfgang von Goethe, “Gefunden”
- Benito Pérez Galdós, from Fortunata y Jacinta
- Pierre de Marivaux, from Le Legs
- Arthur Schopenhauer, from Aphorismen
- José Lezama Lima, “Retrato de Don Francisco de Quevedo”
- François-René de Chateaubriand, from Mémoires d'Outre-Tombe
- Rainer Maria Rilke, from Duino Elegies 1
- Miguel de Cervantes Saavedra, from El ingenioso hidalgo Don Quijote de la Mancha
- Arthur Rimbaud, “Ô saisons ô châteaux”
- Friedrich Heinrich Karl de la Motte Fouqué, from Undine
- D. F. Sarmiento, from Facundo: Civilización y Barbarie en Las Pampas Argentinas
- Voltaire, from Abrégé de l'Histoire Universelle depuis Charlemagne jusques à Charlequint
- Heinrich Heine, “Orpheisch”
- Augusto Roa Bastos, from "La Excavacion”
- Gérard de Nerval, “El Desdichado”
- Franz Kafka, from "Josefine, die Sängerin oder Das Volk der Mäuse"
- Sor Juana Inés de la Cruz, from Respuesta a Sor Filotea de la Cruz
- Georges Perec, from La Disparition
- Jakob & Wilhelm Grimm, from “Der Froschkönig oder der eiserne Heinrich”
- Leopoldo Lugones, “Historia de mi muerte”
- Vincent Voiture, “Pour vos beaux yeux et vostre beau visage”
- Theodor Fontane, from Vor dem Sturm
- Octavio Paz, from “La verdad contra el Compromiso”
- Jackson Wills, “Jackson's Assignment”
- Case Studies (2001)
- Flying Blind (2009)
- Theme & Variations (2010)
- Celanie: Poems & Drawings after Paul Celan (2010-12)
- Jack Ross: Poems
- Emma Smith: Drawings
- Jack Ross: Textual Notes
- Melbourne Notebook (2011-12)
- Marie de France: The Nightingale
- Choruses from the Society of Inner Light
- A Clearer View of the Hinterland (2014)
- Jack Ross: Textual Notes
- Poetry Specials (2008-2018)
- Minotaur (2008)
- Je donne à mon espoir (2008)
- Volcanic Glass (2009)
- Silhouette (2009)
- Pale Star (2011)
- Lounge Room Tribalism (2011)
- Britain's Missing Top Model (2011)
- Except Once (2012)
- Jay Checks His Father into a Home (2014)
- Ice Road Trucker (2015)
- Antigone (2015)
- 1942 (2016)
- Canberra Tales (2017)
- Rather a shock (2017)
- Time for an outing (2017)
- Malinche Dreams (2018)
- Collage Poems (1997-2005)
- Jack’s Metamorphoses (1997-98)
- Conversation Pieces (1997-98)
- Wharfbury Dogs (1998)
- Evenings in the Blackout (1998)
- Dieting. I’m Hungry too (2000)
- In the Cave of Henry James (2000)
- Ancestral Voices (2001)
- Satan’s School for Girls (2002)
- Anamorphoses (2002)
- Postcards (2002-3)
- Servants of the Wankh (2002-3)
- Suburban Apocalypse (2001-4)
- Days Under Water (2001-4)
- Citizens of the People’s Republic of Freaktown (2003-4)
- Muses (for Joanna Margaret Paul) (2004-5)
- Notes
- Can Poetry Save the Earth? (2018)
- John Clare: The Skylark (1835)
- I ♥ NZ (1999)
- Family Plot (2015)
- What to do till the sentinels come (2018)
- 1942 (2016)
- My Uncle Tommy (2018)
- Paul Celan: Matter of Britain (1957)
- Fernando Pessoa (2000)
- Three Versions from Rilke (2019)
- Orpheus. Eurydike. Hermes (1997)
- Herbsttag (1997)
- Archaïscher Torso Apollos (2019)
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Three Versions from Rilke
Thus far they sail in wonder-like iceberg-work,
wish till the silver earth begins to see
all, sadder dark-signed (un)kill. Swish in worse ills,
and spring this blood, this floodgate’s sudden mention,
and swear we pour for sure (assuming) th’uncle.
Son-star nicked rotors.
Belsen was in there
and visionless evil deer. Brew canoe Boleros,
and (yay!) ne’er grocer, grow a blinder tyke,
the rubber sigh – ’Nam: fair, non-grinned, a hick-
weed Reagan. Him. Mill you, bear; I, ne’er land-shaft,
won’t swish in. We’s insane, if town-fella, long mutt-
er: sheer design in Vegas’ blasé strife, en-
vy. I nill anger, bleaker, hunger-lagged …
And these designs in Vegas! Come in, sea.
[17/8-15/10/97]
[from “Jack’s Metamorphoses (Part 2).” brief 19 (2001): 70-79.]
Orpheus - Eurydice - Hermes
If the above seems a bit obscure, that's perhaps because it was constructed in the following manner:
Das war der Seelen wunderliches Bergwerk.
Thus far they sail in wonder-like iceberg-work,
Wie stille Silbererze gingen sie
wish till the silver earth begins to see
als Adern durch sein Dunkel. Zwischen Wurzeln
all, sadder dark-signed (un)kill. Swish in worse ills,
entsprang das Blut, das fortgeht zu den Menschen,
and spring this blood, this floodgate’s sudden mention …
Felsen waren da
Belsen was in there
und wesenlose Wälder. Brücken über Leeres
and visionless evil deer. Brew canoe Boleros,
und jener große, graue, blinde Teich,
and (yay!) ne’er grocer, grow a blinder tyke,
der über seinem fernen Grunde hing
the rubber sigh – ’Nam: fair, non-grinned, a hick-
wie Regenhimmel über einer Landschaft.
weed Reagan. Him. Mill you, bear; I, ne’er land-shaft,
Und zwischen Wiesen, sanft und voller Langmut,
won’t swish in. We’s insane, if town-fella, long mutt-
erschien des einen Weges blasser Streifen,
er: sheer design in Vegas’ blasé strife, en-
wie eine lange Bleiche hingelegt.
vy. I nill anger, bleaker, hunger-lagged …
Und dieses einen Weges kamen sie.
And these designs in Vegas! Come in, sea.
[Rainer Maria Rilke. “Orpheus. Eurydike. Hermes.” Neue Gedichte I (1907). In Ernst Zinn, ed. Sämtliche Werke. 6 vols (Frankfurt: Insel, 1987) 1: 542-45.]
And just how is this a "translation", exactly? Well, certainly it's heavily under the influence of Louis Zukofksy's infamous "homophonic" version of the Roman poet Catullus:Of this epic effort, the "Translators' Preface" comments that: "This translation of Catullus follows the sound, rhythm and syntax of his Latin - tries, as is said, to breathe the "literal" meaning with him."
Odi et amo, quare id faciam, fortasse requiris.
Nescio, sed fieri sentio et excrucior.
– Gaius Valerius Catullus (c.84-54 BC): Elegy LXXXV
Ōdī ět ămō quārē ĭd făcĭăm fŏrtăssě rěquīrĭs
[I detest and I love. Why that I may do, perhaps you ask.]
Nĕscĭō sěd fĭěrī sěntĭŏ ět ěxcrŭcĭŏr
[I do not know, but to become I sense and I am tortured.]
O th’hate I move love. Quarry it fact I am, for that’s so re queries.
Nescience, say th’ fiery scent I owe whets crookeder.
– Louis Zukofsky (1904-1978)
Celia Zukofsky later explained their working procedure in a bit more detail in a 12 Sept. 1978 letter to Burton Hatlen:
I did the spade work. I wrote out the Latin line and over it, indicated the quantity of every vowel and every syllable, that is long or short; then indicated the accented syllable. Below the Latin line I wrote the literal meaning or meanings of every word indicating gender, number, case and the order or sentence structure. I used Lewis & Short Latin Dictionary (Oxford UP) and Allen & Greenough Latin Grammar (Ginn & Co.). Louis then used my material to write poetry — good poetry — I could never do that! I never questioned any of his lines, just copied his handwritten manuscript to facilitate the typing.
For a more literal version of Rilke's famous poem, you might like to take a look at Stephen Mitchell's translation here.
Herr: es ist Zeit. Der Sommer war sehr groß.
Lord: it is time. The summer was so gross
Lag deinen Schatten auf die Sonnenuhren,
Hang your shadows from car-aerials
und auf den Fluren laß die Winde los. …
And over asphalt let dust-devils loose
Wer jetzt kein Haus hat, baut sich keines mehr.
Whoso no house hath, will not build it now
Wer jetzt allein ist, wird es lange bleiben …
Whoso’s alone, long will remain that way
Lord, it is time – the summer was so gross.
Hang your shadows from car aerials,
and over asphalt let dust-devils loose.
Tell the last girls to cover up their breasts –
no more sunbathing on the eastern shore –
button up trousers, blouses, coats; no more
blood-sweetness from the wine-dark flesh.
Whoso no house has, will not build it now.
Whoso’s alone, long will remain that way:
walk, read a little, tap-tap every day
long letters – wander listlessly
fall alleys, where the dead leaves stray.
[15/10/97]
[Jack Ross, City of Strange Brunettes (Auckland: Pohutukawa Press, 1998): 46.]
Jack Ross: City of Strange Brunettes (1998)
This reads a bit more like a conventional translation of Rilke's "Autumn Day" poem, but there's still a bit of Zukofskian word-play going on in my choice of a word such as "gross," which has very distinct meanings in German and English. I also like the way I was able in my syntax – awkward phrasings such as "whoso no house has" for "Wer jetzt kein Haus hat" – to emphasise the dependence of this version on the original at almost all points. Others may have seen this as a reluctance to commit to any one set of words, however.
Herbsttag
Herr: es ist Zeit. Der Sommer war sehr gross.
Leg deinen Schatten auf die Sonnenuhren,
und auf den Fluren lass die Winde los.
Befiehl den letzten Früchten voll zu sein;
gib ihnen noch zwei südlichere Tage,
dränge sie zur Vollendung hin und jage
die letzte Süsse in den schweren Wein.
Wer jetzt kein Haus hat, baut sich keines mehr.
Wer jetzt allein ist, wird es lange bleiben,
wird wachen, lesen, lange Briefe schreiben
und wird in den Alleen hin und her
unruhig wandern, wenn die Blätter treiben.
[Rainer Maria Rilke. “Herbsttag.” Das Buch der Bilder (1902). In Ernst Zinn, ed. Sämtliche Werke. 6 vols (Frankfurt: Insel, 1987) 1: 398.]
For a more literal version of Rilke's poem, you can look at Edward Snow's translation here.
Du mußt dein Leben ändern
– Rainer Maria Rilke
Do we have to feel that pixilated head
burning behind our eyes?the media
keep broadcasting a manacled muscular
torso signalling triumph over the dead
his fingers cocked to a smirkthe score
perhapsJacinda Ardern’s noble face
caught in a rictus of grief can’t quite displace
the bluntness of his semaphore
on this darkest of days it feels like our worst fears
were always justifiedour impotence
out in the open for all to seeour pain
trumped by the old familiar reptile brain
but scrolling down those flowers those faces those tears
I can’t see them as nothingaren’t they us?
Clearly, this is an adaptation rather than a translation. Something about the stance of the suspect in the dock the morning after that appalling day in Christchurch reminded me of Rilke's 'Apollo'. There'd been a lot of online debate, too, about the appropriateness of the phrase 'they are us' coined by the Prime Minister straight after the terrorist attack. It seemed to me to embody an intentional paradox rather than to make any false claims for our actual inclusiveness as a society.
Archaïscher Torso Apollos
Wir kannten nicht sein unerhörtes Haupt,
darin die Augenäpfel reiften. Aber
sein Torso glüht noch wie ein Kandelaber,
in dem sein Schauen, nur zurückgeschraubt,
sich hält und glänzt. Sonst könnte nicht der Bug
der Brust dich blenden, und im leisen Drehen
der Lenden könnte nicht ein Lächeln gehen
zu jener Mitte, die die Zeugung trug.
Sonst stünde dieser Stein enstellt und kurz
unter der Shultern durchsichtigem Sturz
und flimmerte nicht so wie Raubtierfelle;
und brächte nicht aus allen seinen Rändern
aus wie ein Stern: denn da ist keine Stelle,
die dich nicht sieht. Du mußt dein Leben ändern.
[Rainer Maria Rilke. “Archaïscher Torso Apollos.” Neue Gedichte II (1908). In Ernst Zinn, ed. Sämtliche Werke. 6 vols (Frankfurt: Insel, 1987) 1: 557.]
For more literal translations of Rilke's poem, it might be best to compare the multiple versions here.
Archaïscher Torso Apollos
Archaic Torso of Apollo
Wir kannten nicht sein unerhörtes Haupt,
We never knew his unheard-of head
darin die Augenäpfel reiften. Aber
where the eyeballs ripened. But
sein Torso glüht noch wie ein Kandelaber,
his torso still glows like a candelabra
in dem sein Schauen, nur zurückgeschraubt,
in which his gaze, only half-illuminated
sich hält und glänzt. Sonst könnte nicht der Bug
holds and dazzles. Otherwise the bow
der Brust dich blenden, und im leisen Drehen
of the breast wouldn’t join in, and the light twist
der Lenden könnte nicht ein Lächeln gehen
of the loins couldn’t lend a smile
zu jener Mitte, die die Zeugung trug.
to that centre, which holds fertility.
Sonst stünde dieser Stein enstellt und kurz
Otherwise this stone would be shut and cut short
unter der Shultern durchsichtigem Sturz
under the shoulders’ transparent fall
und flimmerte nicht so wie Raubtierfelle;
and would not flicker like a predator’s skin;
und brächte nicht aus allen seinen Rändern
and would not burst out on all sides
aus wie ein Stern: denn da ist keine Stelle,
like a star: since there’s no part
die dich nicht sieht. Du mußt dein Leben ändern.
which doesn’t see you. You must change your life.
Thursday
Fernando Pessoa (2000)
There’s a girl
behind Pessoa. Hurrying over
the paving stones, she
turns her head. I wonder
what happened? No doubt
she was off to market
for a few bits of fish, not knowing
she’d be snapped. She’ll be dead
now. Maybe not. She’ll have
grandchildren, never have cared about poetry
and won’t suspect she’s been found
out. I doubt Pessoa saw her
coming, no friend to the looming
woman on the poet’s left –
and as for the thoughtful man
further back …
Where did the girl end up
that morning? Perhaps a car
idling around the corner
knocked her
down. It worries me, this
image from sixty years ago,
a tricked-out self
in a Portuguese town. What’s the good
of being here?
There’s a curious history behind this poem (just as there no doubt is for the girl behind Pessoa in the photograph above). The Spanish original, “Fotografía de poeta,” by Argentinian writer Jorge Accamé was originally shown to me by a friend of his, Gwenyth Perry, who’d asked him specifically for a poem for me to translate.
I found the original a little difficult to get into, and so enlisted the help of another poetic (albeit Spanish-less) friend, David Howard. David and I came up with the version above, which I duly included (with the original en face) in the poetry magazine I was editing at the time.
Shortly afterwards I received a letter from a High School Spanish teacher, chiding me for my inaccuracies, and including a complete literal version of the poem to help me correct them.
I was, of course, quite aware of the liberties we’d taken – working as a duo seemed to embolden us to take ever greater licence in recasting Accamé’s original – but it still seemed a bit ridiculous to think that an English poem should be judged solely in terms of the accuracy of its reflection of the original. Who knows, though? Maybe she was right.
David must have thought otherwise. The next thing I heard, he’d written some additional sections, and wanted to include the whole piece in his latest book of poems, called How to Occupy Our Selves (2003). This seemed to me to be going a bit too far in the opposite direction, but I nevertheless granted permission for my part, at least, in this unusually collaborative work.
“What’s the good / of being here?” – our version of the original’s “Ni siquiera tendría un buen motivo para estar allí” [it’s not certain that she had a good reason for being there] – came in for particular censure from the Spanish teacher, as I recall. Certainly we’d tweaked it up a notch (or so we thought): extending a rather offhand conclusion into something more “philosophical.”
Who’s the author, then? David clearly thinks he is. He includes one of the later segments of his own poem under the original title “A Photograph of the Poet” in his Incomplete Poems (2011), the most considerable collection of this work to date. I tend to think I am, since most of the actual translation was contributed by me. Others would attribute it more straightforwardly to Jorge Accamé, given that the original poem – most of which has survived even into our free adaptation – is definitely and definitively by him.
Perhaps the real answer is Pessoa himself. So potent is the influence of his identity-less persona, that the mere idea of it can still confuse us all eighty-odd years after his death.
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Tuesday
Can Poetry Save the Earth?

Our Changing World: Yearn to Learn (2018)
Can Poetry Save the Earth?
Our Changing World
Public Lecture Series
Albany Campus, Massey University, Thursday 31st May, 6-7.30 pm
Can poetry save the Earth?
Thursday 31 May 2018 | Associate Professor Bryan Walpert, Dr Jack Ross, Dr Jo EmeneyCan Poetry Save the Earth? A Field Guide to Nature Poems is the title of poet and critic John Felstiner's 2009 exploration of how the human and natural worlds connect. Can writing and reading poetry change both? It’s a question that resonates with one of the most pressing issues of our time – the impact of climate change. Poets and editors Associate Professor Bryan Walpert, Dr Jack Ross and Dr Jo Emeney, from Massey’s creative writing programme, discuss how imagination and thinking about nature can be opened up through poetry and will read from their own work.
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- John Clare: The Skylark (1835)
- I ♥ NZ (1999)
- Family Plot (2015)
- What to do till the sentinels come (2018)
- 1942 (2016)
- My Uncle Tommy (2018)
- Paul Celan: Matter of Britain (1957)



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Monday
The Skylark (John Clare)
The rolls and harrows lie at rest beside
The battered road; and spreading far and wide
Above the russet clods, the corn is seen
Sprouting its spiry points of tender green,
Where squats the hare, to terrors wide awake,
Like some brown clod the harrows failed to break.
Opening their golden caskets to the sun,
The buttercups make schoolboys eager run,
To see who shall be first to pluck the prize –
Up from their hurry, see, the skylark flies,
And o'er her half-formed nest, with happy wings
Winnows the air, till in the cloud she sings,
Then hangs a dust-spot in the sunny skies,
And drops, and drops, till in her nest she lies,
Which they unheeded passed – not dreaming then
That birds which flew so high would drop agen
To nests upon the ground, which anything
May come at to destroy. Had they the wing
Like such a bird, themselves would be too proud,
And build on nothing but a passing cloud!
As free from danger as the heavens are free
From pain and toil, there would they build and be,
And sail about the world to scenes unheard
Of and unseen – Oh, were they but a bird!
So think they, while they listen to its song,
And smile and fancy and so pass along;
While its low nest, moist with the dews of morn,
Lies safely, with the leveret, in the corn.
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